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Keeping a secret Pg2 by ~innocent-rebel:iconinnocent-rebel:

Categories Digital Art > Drawings > Miscellaneous

©2009 ~innocent-rebel
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Secong page is up! Sorry it took so long, had issues with photoshop that just got figured out. Anyways, hope this page is easier to read. The blue box is Vera's thoughts (thought that might help differeniate).

Lineart was done by :iconinnocent-rebel: (me)
The coloring of awesomeness done by :iconwanequelle:

Hope you guys like it.
First page can be found here:[link]
Next page: [link]

Torbin Zix (C) Mirage
Vera Ingrid (C) :iconwanequelle:

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:iconwanequelle:
~Wanequelle Jun 30, 2009, 5:51:27 PM
One day we shall find a good way to do text bubbles. They're like super difficult in my version of photoshop though... oh but you're missing an apostrophe in no one's. It's a contraction.

Hmmmph, I see all the flaws in my coloring now. :(

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So the struck eagle, stretch'd upon the plain,
No more through rolling clouds to soar again,
View'd his own feather on the fatal dart,
And wing'd the shaft that quiver'd in his heart.
:iconinnocent-rebel:
~innocent-rebel Jun 30, 2009, 5:56:53 PM
I know! I think I figured out some kind of way to do it, but it's nothing clean like I've seen other people manage. :( *slaps forehead* Oops. Sorry about the missing apostrophe.

:hug: That's ok. I think it looks great. I think you did the shadows really well and overall it looks awesome!

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~Wanequelle Jun 30, 2009, 5:58:59 PM
yeah i've seen a tutorial but the tutorial is for more advanced photoshops so I can't really do it. Sides, I only know the basics anyways. Heck, I don't even use gradients. *le sigh*

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So the struck eagle, stretch'd upon the plain,
No more through rolling clouds to soar again,
View'd his own feather on the fatal dart,
And wing'd the shaft that quiver'd in his heart.
:iconjenca:
~Jenca Jun 30, 2009, 6:52:44 PM
Ooo! This is leaps and bounds better than the last one! :hug: I can see both of your heard work! :hug: :highfive:

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~Mechanical-Dragon Jul 1, 2009, 12:12:25 PM
This looks great! Woderful line art, and :iconwanequelle: did an awesome job coloring it.

The panel layout and mixed use of long and close shots looks really good, and use of a different color text box for Vera's thoughts really helps organize the page layout.

In order to make cleaner text bubbles, have you considered using the pen tool to make the outline?

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~Majojoy Jul 2, 2009, 10:32:43 AM
Wow more zixx!!! i love it, great job girls!!!!!!!

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~Sergeant-McFluffers Jul 2, 2009, 4:22:28 PM
Friggan awesome XD

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:iconinnocent-rebel:
~innocent-rebel Jul 13, 2009, 9:39:51 AM
Thanks! Yep, Wan has awesome coloring skills!

Phew!:D Glad the layout is ok. I think that's the hardest part for me is figuring out the layout. Glad it looks good, and that it's more organized.

What do you mean by pen tool? I have a tablet and I outline the word bubbles in black with it, but is it the same as a pen tool? ^^;

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If people make fun of you, it's only because they wish they had the courage to stand out like you.

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~innocent-rebel Jul 13, 2009, 9:40:06 AM
Thank you very much! :hug: Glad it's improved.

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If people make fun of you, it's only because they wish they had the courage to stand out like you.

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